Re: CVS commit: src/games/fortune/datfiles

[Paul Goyette <paul%whooppee.com@localhost>]

On Wed, 6 Dec 2017, Tom Ivar Helbekkmo wrote:

> Tom Ivar Helbekkmo <tih%hamartun.priv.no@localhost> writes:
>
> > "stop out journey" should be "stop our journey", and the last sentence
> > should probably be "It seems that you care more about barking than the
> > dog does, and more about winning the war with a lousy puppy than about
> > reaching the destination quickly."

I fixed these, as suggested.

> Oh, and I'd also change "its canine barking" to "its barking," (note the
> addition of a comma), which would make that sentence flow better, and
> avoid the unnecessary re-use of the word 'canine'.

Hmmm, it'd be nice if there were a definitive source for this quote; 
without that, I'd rather not "adjust" the language.


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