Re: CVS commit: src/games/fortune/datfiles

[Tom Ivar Helbekkmo <tih%hamartun.priv.no@localhost>]

Tom Ivar Helbekkmo <tih%hamartun.priv.no@localhost> writes:

> "stop out journey" should be "stop our journey", and the last sentence
> should probably be "It seems that you care more about barking than the
> dog does, and more about winning the war with a lousy puppy than about
> reaching the destination quickly."

Oh, and I'd also change "its canine barking" to "its barking," (note the
addition of a comma), which would make that sentence flow better, and
avoid the unnecessary re-use of the word 'canine'.

-tih
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