Re: CVS commit: src/share/man/man9

[Tetsuya Isaki <isaki%pastel-flower.jp@localhost>]

Hello,

At Sat, 6 Feb 2021 13:55:40 +0000,
Nia Alarie wrote:
> Module Name:	src
> Committed By:	nia
> Date:		Sat Feb  6 13:55:40 UTC 2021
> 
> Modified Files:
> 	src/share/man/man9: audio.9
> 
> Log Message:
> Fix various typos, etc
> 
> 
> To generate a diff of this commit:
> cvs rdiff -u -r1.59 -r1.60 src/share/man/man9/audio.9

> @@ -175,9 +175,9 @@
>  .Vt audio_format_t
>  structure according to given number
>  .Va afp->index .
> -If there is no format with given number, return
> +If there is no format with the given number, return
>  .Er EINVAL .
> -It is called at any time.
> +It can be called at any time.

The later sounds to me "You(developer of MD driver) can call
it at any time".  If so, it's incorrect.

>  Similarly, if the driver supports
>  .Dv SLINEAR_OE:16
>  and the upper layer chooses it,
> -the driver does not need to provide a conversion function.
> -Because the upper layer only supports conversion between
> +the driver does not need to provide a conversion function,
> +because the upper layer supports conversion between

Is "only" a typo?  or is it better to remove it in English?

Thanks,
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Tetsuya Isaki <isaki%pastel-flower.jp@localhost / isaki%NetBSD.org@localhost>