Re: proofreading pkgsrc flyers

[Stefan 'Kaishakunin' Schumacher <stefan%net-tex.de@localhost>]

Also sprach Stefan 'Kaishakunin' Schumacher (stefan%net-tex.de@localhost)
> I've created two flyers to advocate pkgsrc, one in German and another
> in English. Contents are the same. However, I would prefer if someone
> would proofread them.
> 
> http://net-tex.dnsalias.org/~stefan/nt/netbsd/advocacy/a4-pkgsrc-de.pdf
> http://net-tex.dnsalias.org/~stefan/nt/netbsd/advocacy/a4-pkgsrc-en.pdf

Thanks for all the suggestions, I've updated both flyers. 

I removed pkg_views and substituted it with a section about Docs and
installing as non-root. It would be great if someone could write 2-3
sentences for the toppic of non-privileged buils, since I never used
it.

This time, I included the printable screenshot, so each PDF is now
3.5MB large.


Stefan
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