Re: proofreading pkgsrc flyers

["david.aubril" <david.aubril%ac-nantes.fr@localhost>]

Nice work.
Three things :
1°) "Those packages are uploaded to _ftp.pkgsrc.org _and freely 
available to all pkgsrc users."
Well, what is that ftp ? where do you find it ?
2°) In the english version, there is some german text under the pictures 
( page 1 ). You show a screenshot of pkg_select, but you don't mention 
it in page 2, "Additional Programs".
3°) "To install a package, simply enter the specific directory and type 
make install clean"
Actually, it might be better to type "make install clean clean-depends".
Best regards.
David



Stefan 'Kaishakunin' Schumacher wrote:
> I've created two flyers to advocate pkgsrc, one in German and another
> in English. Contents are the same. However, I would prefer if someone
> would proofread them.
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> http://net-tex.dnsalias.org/~stefan/nt/netbsd/advocacy/a4-pkgsrc-de.pdf
> http://net-tex.dnsalias.org/~stefan/nt/netbsd/advocacy/a4-pkgsrc-en.pdf
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