[pkgsrc/trunk]: pkgsrc/databases/redis minor edits for grammar/usage

[dholland <dholland%pkgsrc.org@localhost>]

details:   https://anonhg.NetBSD.org/pkgsrc/rev/6b8f18a3d3d6
branches:  trunk
changeset: 356182:6b8f18a3d3d6
user:      dholland <dholland%pkgsrc.org@localhost>
date:      Wed Dec 21 00:23:22 2016 +0000

description:
minor edits for grammar/usage

diffstat:

 databases/redis/DESCR |  6 +++---
 1 files changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)

diffs (13 lines):

diff -r 4a1bbe2551f7 -r 6b8f18a3d3d6 databases/redis/DESCR
--- a/databases/redis/DESCR     Tue Dec 20 23:47:34 2016 +0000
+++ b/databases/redis/DESCR     Wed Dec 21 00:23:22 2016 +0000
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 Redis is an advanced key-value store. It is similar to memcached but the
 dataset is not volatile, and values can be strings, exactly like in memcached,
-but also lists, sets, and ordered sets. All this data types can be manipulated
+but also lists, sets, and ordered sets. All these data types can be manipulated
 with atomic operations to push/pop elements, add/remove elements, perform
-server side union, intersection, difference between sets, and so forth. Redis
-supports different kind of sorting abilities.
+server side union, intersection, and difference between sets, and so forth.
+Redis also supports different kinds of sorting.