I've made two new and improved diffs. SHA512 (92distribdiff) = b8c6146f75112d7b284e91e5176a9e9364f13f4ef98b269f19e0b09767aefcd0d582c3e6e0e9fa030578b93f65f9489a8eee559e55830425425c543058221f81 SHA512 (currentdistribdiff) = f3eb9810b8d38a876f5fc29dbbe720aefafaac4cceb49ba4f725774cc2322b21d45508c2ebe4a27f46a9b04291ed7f57a3f856f6f87db468cfe0eb118e537f22 Thank you nia@ for the help! On Sat, Dec 4, 2021 at 11:43 PM Andras Farkas <deepbluemistake%gmail.com@localhost> wrote: > > Hi! > > I spotted some minor errors in: > https://cdn.netbsd.org/pub/NetBSD/NetBSD-9.2/amd64/INSTALL.html > > I've attached a diff. My apologies for it just being a diff of the > .html file, but I don't know what it's generated from. I'm willing to > make a diff of the actual source if I can be guided to the right file, > and to the right directions to produce a good diff. > SHA512 (installhtmldiff) = > 32133a427065478c422626f9b79670f7bfc2067eab6ccf4fc52260f71f6def291b8f43ab076d09cb546d8a566551c5612990d0532f158aae5ab3b73890ff26e7 > The most important fixes are the English grammar and spelling fixes, > though I included other small things. > > I send this as an email rather than using the web Send PR form since I > wasn't able to upload a diff file there. > > One thing I didn't do in the diff... I wish the mentions of full, > minimal, and custom installations mentioned how a full installation > isn't truly full: it doesn't install the source sets. That caught me > the first time, and I had to correct that with a second install. > (doing a custom install to get all the sets, including source sets: on > that topic, I wish the USB install image included the source sets) > > Thanks for reading!
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