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envsys.4 && sysmon_envsys.9: grammar corrections
Hi,
A few grammar corrections for envsys.4 and sysmon_envsys.9 are attached.
Best regards,
Constantine.
From eb80390af5b5ca64c3c6d44dde68b4b4478d5e60 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Constantine A. Murenin <cnst+netbsd%bugmail.mojo.ru@localhost>
Date: Tue, 3 Nov 2009 01:00:07 -0500
Subject: [PATCH 1/2] grammar
---
share/man/man4/envsys.4 | 2 +-
1 files changed, 1 insertions(+), 1 deletions(-)
diff --git a/share/man/man4/envsys.4 b/share/man/man4/envsys.4
index 43f6435..8d872e0 100644
--- a/share/man/man4/envsys.4
+++ b/share/man/man4/envsys.4
@@ -157,7 +157,7 @@ Let's explain some more about those objects:
.It Fa allow-rfact
Set to
.Em true
-mean that the sensor is able to change the resistor factor,
+means that the sensor is able to change the resistor factor,
only used in Voltage sensors.
.It Fa avg-value
Current average value in the sensor.
--
1.6.4
From b43fed2f2c41ebf23f4a5c105be0406fe6f07b44 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Constantine A. Murenin <cnst+netbsd%bugmail.mojo.ru@localhost>
Date: Tue, 10 Nov 2009 17:18:28 -0500
Subject: [PATCH 2/2] grammar
---
share/man/man9/sysmon_envsys.9 | 6 +++---
1 files changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)
diff --git a/share/man/man9/sysmon_envsys.9 b/share/man/man9/sysmon_envsys.9
index 206c32b..0411498 100644
--- a/share/man/man9/sysmon_envsys.9
+++ b/share/man/man9/sysmon_envsys.9
@@ -85,7 +85,7 @@ calling the
.Fn sysmon_envsys_register
function to register the device.
.Pp
-If there's some error before registering the device, the
+If there is some error before registering the device, the
.Fn sysmon_envsys_destroy
function must be used to detach the sensors previously attached
and free the sysmon_envsys object allocated by the
@@ -94,7 +94,7 @@ function.
.Pp
The
.Em sysmon_envsys
-structure is defined as follow
+structure is defined as follows
(only the public members are shown):
.Bd -literal
struct sysmon_envsys {
@@ -274,7 +274,7 @@ event will never be sent, and the graceful shutdown won't
be possible.
.Ss SENSOR DETAILS
Each sensor uses a
.Sy envsys_data_t
-structure, it's defined as follow (only the public members are shown);
+structure, it's defined as follows (only the public members are shown);
.Bd -literal
typedef struct envsys_data {
uint32_t units;
--
1.6.4
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