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Re: CVS commit: src/usr.sbin/rtsold



    Date:        Sun, 26 May 2013 12:54:44 +0200
    From:        Thomas Klausner <wiz%NetBSD.org@localhost>
    Message-ID:  <20130526105444.GU9960%danbala.tuwien.ac.at@localhost>

  | Could one of the native speakers please fix it in a way that we won't
  | have this discussion again?

Try the patch below, which I think is both correct, and acceptable in all
dialects of English...

kre

--- rtsold.8.was        2013-05-26 23:59:52.000000000 +0700
+++ rtsold.8    2013-05-27 00:00:56.000000000 +0700
@@ -102,8 +102,9 @@
 daemon cannot get the interface status.
 This feature does not conform to the IPv6 neighbor discovery
 specification, but is provided for mobile stations.
-The default interval for router advertisements, which is on the order of 10
-minutes, is slightly long for mobile stations.
+The default interval for router advertisements,
+which is approximately 10 minutes,
+is slightly long for mobile stations.
 This feature is provided
 for such stations so that they can find new routers as soon as possible
 when they attach to another link.





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