Subject: CVS commit: htdocs/guide/en
To: None <www-changes@NetBSD.org>
From: Min Sik Kim <minskim@netbsd.org>
List: www-changes
Date: 11/29/2004 04:33:40
Module Name:	htdocs
Committed By:	minskim
Date:		Mon Nov 29 04:33:40 UTC 2004

Modified Files:
	htdocs/guide/en: chap-intro.xml

Log Message:
Minor fixes:
  - Use &os; instead of ``NetBSD''.
  - Use a semicolon, instead of a colon, to separate two sentences.
  - Use commas, not colons, to separate digits into groups of three.
  - The official project name is ``PostgreSQL'', not ``Postgres''.
  - Add a link to the pkgsrc homepage.


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