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On Tue, Nov 16, 2004 at 01:25:59AM +0100, Hubert Feyrer wrote:
> On Mon, 15 Nov 2004, Daniel Carosone wrote:
> >This one change below seems to have broken the english..
>=20
> Um, sort of true, which seems was not hard for that long a sentence.
> How about this:
>=20
>       <para>
>         Now it's time to create our <devicename>cgd</devicename>, for whi=
ch
>         we'll need a passphrase.  This passphrase needs to be entered
>         every time the <devicename>cgd</devicename> is opened, which is
>         usually at each reboot. The encryption key is derived from this
>         passphrase and the salt that the encryption key used.

just ".. is derived from the passphrase and the salt." as I suggested, is f=
ine.

> >perhaps, instead, "... reboot. The encryption key used by cgd is
> >derived from this passphrase and the salt."

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Dan.
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