Subject: CVS commit: htdocs/guide/en
To: None <>
From: grant beattie <>
List: www-changes
Date: 05/23/2003 16:13:26
Module Name:	htdocs
Committed By:	grant
Date:		Fri May 23 16:13:26 UTC 2003

Modified Files:
	htdocs/guide/en: chap-2boot.xml chap-boot.xml chap-dns.xml
	    chap-inst.xml chap-intro.xml chap-kernel.xml chap-licence.xml
	    chap-net.xml chap-pack.xml chap-print.xml netbsd.xml preface.xml

Log Message:
fix various markup mistakes from Hiroki Sato to netbsd-docs@.

 - Some of "$NetBSD$" line are used in order to explain what it is,
   but committing the .xml file breaks it.  They should be escaped
   using &#36;.

 - <screen> element should not be used as <tt> or <pre> in HTML.
   Some of them should be <programlisting> or <literallayout>,
   and <screen> element should be carefully placed without

 - Information about the authors and the contributors should go
   into <sectinfo> or <chapterinfo>.

 - Use <quote>foo</quote> instead of &quot;foo&quot;.  The latter is
   not reasonable in SGML/XML manner.

 - The license section should be marked up with <legalnotice>.

 - Other minor fixes.

To generate a diff of this commit:
cvs rdiff -r1.1 -r1.2 htdocs/guide/en/chap-2boot.xml \
    htdocs/guide/en/chap-boot.xml htdocs/guide/en/chap-inst.xml \
    htdocs/guide/en/chap-intro.xml htdocs/guide/en/chap-kernel.xml \
    htdocs/guide/en/chap-net.xml htdocs/guide/en/chap-pack.xml \
    htdocs/guide/en/chap-print.xml htdocs/guide/en/netbsd.xml \
cvs rdiff -r1.2 -r1.3 htdocs/guide/en/chap-dns.xml \

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