[src/trunk]: src BUILDING: wording tweaks

[lukem <lukem%NetBSD.org@localhost>]

details:   https://anonhg.NetBSD.org/src/rev/0a4a1f1ceae1
branches:  trunk
changeset: 377298:0a4a1f1ceae1
user:      lukem <lukem%NetBSD.org@localhost>
date:      Wed Jul 05 16:41:12 2023 +0000

description:
BUILDING: wording tweaks

diffstat:

 BUILDING          |  10 +++++-----
 doc/BUILDING.mdoc |  21 ++++++++++++---------
 2 files changed, 17 insertions(+), 14 deletions(-)

diffs (87 lines):

diff -r 23e75490f71f -r 0a4a1f1ceae1 BUILDING
--- a/BUILDING  Wed Jul 05 16:40:33 2023 +0000
+++ b/BUILDING  Wed Jul 05 16:41:12 2023 +0000
@@ -93,9 +93,9 @@ FILES
                     during the build.
 
    Build tree layout
-     The NetBSD build tree is described in hier(7) (mdoc(7) source in
+     The NetBSD build tree is described in hier(7) (whose mdoc(7) source is in
      share/man/man7/hier.7), and the release layout is described in release(7)
-     (mdoc(7) source in share/man/man7/release.7).
+     (whose mdoc(7) source is in share/man/man7/release.7).
 
 CONFIGURATION
    Environment variables
@@ -218,8 +218,8 @@ CONFIGURATION
                      Default: "/tmp".
 
    "make" variables
-     Variables control the behavior of NetBSD builds are documented in
-     mk.conf(5) (mdoc(7) source in share/man/man5/mk.conf.5).
+     Variables that control the behavior of NetBSD builds are documented in
+     mk.conf(5) (whose mdoc(7) source is in share/man/man5/mk.conf.5).
 
      Unless otherwise specified, these variables may be set in either the
      process environment or the make(1) configuration file mk.conf(5)
@@ -819,4 +819,4 @@ CAVEATS
      in object directories.  Instead, one may have to manually remove the
      files.  Consult the UPDATING file for notices concerning this.
 
-NetBSD                           June 11, 2023                          NetBSD
+NetBSD                           July 5, 2023                           NetBSD
diff -r 23e75490f71f -r 0a4a1f1ceae1 doc/BUILDING.mdoc
--- a/doc/BUILDING.mdoc Wed Jul 05 16:40:33 2023 +0000
+++ b/doc/BUILDING.mdoc Wed Jul 05 16:41:12 2023 +0000
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-.\"    $NetBSD: BUILDING.mdoc,v 1.144 2023/06/11 20:34:14 lukem Exp $
+.\"    $NetBSD: BUILDING.mdoc,v 1.145 2023/07/05 16:41:12 lukem Exp $
 .\"
 .\" Copyright (c) 2001-2023 The NetBSD Foundation, Inc.
 .\" All rights reserved.
@@ -33,7 +33,7 @@
 .\" Toolchain prefix for commands
 .ds toolprefix nb
 .
-.Dd June 11, 2023
+.Dd July 5, 2023
 .Dt BUILDING 8
 .Os NetBSD
 .\" turn off hyphenation
@@ -222,13 +222,15 @@ The
 .Nx
 build tree is described in
 .Xr hier 7
-.Xr ( mdoc 7
-source in
+(whose
+.Xr mdoc 7
+source is in
 .Pa share/man/man7/hier.7 ) ,
 and the release layout is described in
 .Xr release 7
-.Xr ( mdoc 7
-source in
+(whose
+.Xr mdoc 7
+source is in
 .Pa share/man/man7/release.7 ) .
 .
 .Sh CONFIGURATION
@@ -487,12 +489,13 @@ option.
 .
 .Ss \*qmake\*q variables
 .
-Variables control the behavior of
+Variables that control the behavior of
 .Nx
 builds are documented in
 .Xr mk.conf 5
-.Xr ( mdoc 7
-source in
+(whose
+.Xr mdoc 7
+source is in
 .Pa share/man/man5/mk.conf.5 ) .
 .Pp
 Unless otherwise specified, these variables may be set in