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[src/trunk]: src/share/man/man4 Minor wording improvements.



details:   https://anonhg.NetBSD.org/src/rev/6e560258b2f2
branches:  trunk
changeset: 974264:6e560258b2f2
user:      wiz <wiz%NetBSD.org@localhost>
date:      Sun Jul 26 21:47:16 2020 +0000

description:
Minor wording improvements.

diffstat:

 share/man/man4/wwanc.4 |  11 ++++++-----
 1 files changed, 6 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)

diffs (36 lines):

diff -r e0724224a554 -r 6e560258b2f2 share/man/man4/wwanc.4
--- a/share/man/man4/wwanc.4    Sun Jul 26 21:46:10 2020 +0000
+++ b/share/man/man4/wwanc.4    Sun Jul 26 21:47:16 2020 +0000
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-.\" $NetBSD: wwanc.4,v 1.3 2020/07/26 15:57:03 jdolecek Exp $
+.\" $NetBSD: wwanc.4,v 1.4 2020/07/26 21:47:16 wiz Exp $
 .\"
 .\" Copyright (c) 2020 The NetBSD Foundation, Inc.
 .\" All rights reserved.
@@ -38,13 +38,14 @@
 .Nm
 driver provides support for Fibocom L850-GL / Intel XMM7360.
 .Pp
-Device establishes connections via cellular networks such as
+The device establishes connections via cellular networks such as
 GPRS, UMTS, and LTE.
 They appear as a regular point-to-point network interface,
 transporting raw IP frames.
 .Pp
-SIM card needs to be unlocked, driver provides no means to provide
-password for the SIM.
+The SIM card needs to be unlocked, the
+.Nm
+driver provides no means to provide a password for the SIM.
 .Sh HARDWARE
 The following devices should work:
 .Pp
@@ -81,7 +82,7 @@
 .Nm
 driver IPv6 support is untested.
 .Pp
-Network initialization requires Python script published on the Linux
+Network initialization requires a Python script published in the Linux
 driver repository.
 The script requires the management device nodes to be created via:
 .Bd -literal -offset indent



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