[pkgsrc/trunk]: pkgsrc/doc/guide/files submit.xml: minor grammar tweaks

[gutteridge <gutteridge%pkgsrc.org@localhost>]

details:   https://anonhg.NetBSD.org/pkgsrc/rev/61de4903c5ac
branches:  trunk
changeset: 428620:61de4903c5ac
user:      gutteridge <gutteridge%pkgsrc.org@localhost>
date:      Wed Apr 29 23:09:48 2020 +0000

description:
submit.xml: minor grammar tweaks

diffstat:

 doc/guide/files/submit.xml |  6 +++---
 1 files changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)

diffs (23 lines):

diff -r e4078fa1b90f -r 61de4903c5ac doc/guide/files/submit.xml
--- a/doc/guide/files/submit.xml        Wed Apr 29 23:07:37 2020 +0000
+++ b/doc/guide/files/submit.xml        Wed Apr 29 23:09:48 2020 +0000
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-<!-- $NetBSD: submit.xml,v 1.35 2020/02/24 21:13:56 rillig Exp $ -->
+<!-- $NetBSD: submit.xml,v 1.36 2020/04/29 23:09:48 gutteridge Exp $ -->
 
 <chapter id="submit"> <?dbhtml filename="submit.html"?>
 <title>Submitting and Committing</title>
@@ -209,11 +209,11 @@
 
 <para>Renaming packages is not recommended.</para>
 
-<para>When renaming packages, be sure to fix any references to old name
+<para>When renaming packages, be sure to fix any references to the old name
   in other Makefiles, options, buildlink files, etc.</para>
 
 <para>
-  Also when renaming a package, please add
+  Also, when renaming a package, please add
   the package name and version pattern(s) of the previous package
   to <varname>SUPERSEDES</varname>.
   This may be repeated for multiple renames.