[src/trunk]: src/share/man/man4 Improve wording; add missing comma.

[wiz <wiz%NetBSD.org@localhost>]

details:   https://anonhg.NetBSD.org/src/rev/969bca87d0aa
branches:  trunk
changeset: 811145:969bca87d0aa
user:      wiz <wiz%NetBSD.org@localhost>
date:      Wed Oct 14 08:32:24 2015 +0000

description:
Improve wording; add missing comma.

diffstat:

 share/man/man4/valz.4 |  14 +++++++-------
 1 files changed, 7 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-)

diffs (40 lines):

diff -r 50a23eda3744 -r 969bca87d0aa share/man/man4/valz.4
--- a/share/man/man4/valz.4     Wed Oct 14 07:16:04 2015 +0000
+++ b/share/man/man4/valz.4     Wed Oct 14 08:32:24 2015 +0000
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-.\" $NetBSD: valz.4,v 1.1 2015/10/14 04:22:45 nonaka Exp $
+.\" $NetBSD: valz.4,v 1.2 2015/10/14 08:32:24 wiz Exp $
 .\"
 .\" Copyright (c) 2004 The NetBSD Foundation, Inc.
 .\" All rights reserved.
@@ -33,8 +33,8 @@
 .Sh SYNOPSIS
 .Cd "valz* at acpi?"
 .Sh DESCRIPTION
-Toshiba Dynabook series computers provide HCI/SCI I/O controller
-that handles various interface devices.
+Toshiba Dynabook series computers provide HCI/SCI I/O controllers
+that handle various interface devices.
 This special I/O controller is accessed by the
 .Dq GHCI
 ACPI method.
@@ -55,10 +55,10 @@
 .Pp
 The
 .Nm
-driver has only been tested on Dynabook R63/PS and some 2013 year or later
-Dynabook models.
+driver has only been tested on the Dynabook R63/PS and some Dynabook
+models from 2013 or later.
 .Sh SEE ALSO
-.Xr acpi 4
+.Xr acpi 4 ,
 .Xr vald 4
 .Sh HISTORY
 The
@@ -66,4 +66,4 @@
 driver appeared in
 .Nx 8.0 .
 .Sh BUGS
-Not all HCI/SCI function is not implemented.
+Not all HCI/SCI functions are implemented.