[src/trunk]: src/share/man/man9 language improvement

[plunky <plunky%NetBSD.org@localhost>]

details:   https://anonhg.NetBSD.org/src/rev/5a900005cade
branches:  trunk
changeset: 778528:5a900005cade
user:      plunky <plunky%NetBSD.org@localhost>
date:      Mon Apr 02 09:56:58 2012 +0000

description:
language improvement

diffstat:

 share/man/man9/pmf.9 |  12 +++++++-----
 1 files changed, 7 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)

diffs (38 lines):

diff -r 83ad8348fc8c -r 5a900005cade share/man/man9/pmf.9
--- a/share/man/man9/pmf.9      Mon Apr 02 09:01:30 2012 +0000
+++ b/share/man/man9/pmf.9      Mon Apr 02 09:56:58 2012 +0000
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-.\" $NetBSD: pmf.9,v 1.19 2010/12/02 12:54:13 wiz Exp $
+.\" $NetBSD: pmf.9,v 1.20 2012/04/02 09:56:58 plunky Exp $
 .\"
 .\" Copyright (c) 2007 Jared D. McNeill <jmcneill%invisible.ca@localhost>
 .\" All rights reserved.
@@ -24,7 +24,7 @@
 .\" ARISING IN ANY WAY OUT OF THE USE OF THIS SOFTWARE, EVEN IF ADVISED OF THE
 .\" POSSIBILITY OF SUCH DAMAGE.
 .\"
-.Dd February 25, 2010
+.Dd April 2, 2012
 .Dt PMF 9
 .Os
 .Sh NAME
@@ -138,14 +138,16 @@
 .Bl -tag -width compact
 .It Fn pmf_device_register "dev" "suspend" "resume"
 Register a device with the power management framework.
+The
 .Fa suspend
 and
 .Fa resume
-are passed
+functions are passed
 .Fa dev
 and a
-.Fa pmf_qual_t ;
-they return
+.Fa pmf_qual_t ,
+and will be called when the system state changes;
+they should return
 .Dv true
 on success and
 .Dv false