[src/trunk]: src/share/man/man4 From Bug Hunting:

[wiz <wiz%NetBSD.org@localhost>]

details:   https://anonhg.NetBSD.org/src/rev/94b155ecefa7
branches:  trunk
changeset: 780040:94b155ecefa7
user:      wiz <wiz%NetBSD.org@localhost>
date:      Sun Jul 08 22:47:41 2012 +0000

description:
>From Bug Hunting:
improve wording, macro usage, and punctuation.

While here, remove an unnecessary comma and sort SEE ALSO.

diffstat:

 share/man/man4/vnd.4 |  22 +++++++++++++---------
 1 files changed, 13 insertions(+), 9 deletions(-)

diffs (58 lines):

diff -r 019ccd69abe6 -r 94b155ecefa7 share/man/man4/vnd.4
--- a/share/man/man4/vnd.4      Sun Jul 08 20:14:11 2012 +0000
+++ b/share/man/man4/vnd.4      Sun Jul 08 22:47:41 2012 +0000
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-.\"    $NetBSD: vnd.4,v 1.17 2009/12/18 23:37:38 dyoung Exp $
+.\"    $NetBSD: vnd.4,v 1.18 2012/07/08 22:47:41 wiz Exp $
 .\"
 .\" Copyright (c) 1996, 1997 The NetBSD Foundation, Inc.
 .\" All rights reserved.
@@ -43,11 +43,13 @@
 This is useful for a variety of applications, including swap files
 and building miniroot or floppy disk images.
 .Pp
-This document assumes that you're familiar with how to generate kernels,
-how to properly configure disks and pseudo-devices in a kernel
+This document assumes that you're familiar with how to generate kernels
+and how to properly configure disks and pseudo-devices in a kernel
 configuration file.
 .Pp
-In order to compile in support for the vnd, you must add a line similar
+In order to compile in support for the
+.Nm ,
+you must add a line similar
 to the following to your kernel configuration file:
 .Bd -unfilled -offset indent
 pseudo-device  vnd             # vnode disk driver
@@ -59,15 +61,17 @@
 options        VND_COMPRESSION    # compressed vnd(4)
 .Ed
 .Pp
-Compressed disk images are expected in the cloop2 format,
-they can be created from "normal" disk images by the
+Compressed disk images are expected in the cloop2 format.
+They can be created from
+.Dq normal
+disk images by the
 .Xr vndcompress 1
 program.
 .Pp
 There is a run-time utility that is used for configuring
 both compressed and uncompressed
-.Nm vnd Ns s .
-See
+.Nm vnd Ns s ;
+see
 .Xr vnconfig 8
 for more information.
 .Sh FILES
@@ -78,8 +82,8 @@
 .Sh SEE ALSO
 .Xr config 1 ,
 .Xr vndcompress 1 ,
+.Xr fsck 8 ,
 .Xr MAKEDEV 8 ,
-.Xr fsck 8 ,
 .Xr mount 8 ,
 .Xr newfs 8 ,
 .Xr vnconfig 8