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[src/trunk]: src/usr.sbin/rtsold some wording fixes



details:   https://anonhg.NetBSD.org/src/rev/60ddc0456725
branches:  trunk
changeset: 750700:60ddc0456725
user:      mbalmer <mbalmer%NetBSD.org@localhost>
date:      Mon Jan 11 09:21:39 2010 +0000

description:
some wording fixes

diffstat:

 usr.sbin/rtsold/rtsold.8 |  13 +++++++------
 1 files changed, 7 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)

diffs (62 lines):

diff -r fe96fc627b09 -r 60ddc0456725 usr.sbin/rtsold/rtsold.8
--- a/usr.sbin/rtsold/rtsold.8  Mon Jan 11 09:03:46 2010 +0000
+++ b/usr.sbin/rtsold/rtsold.8  Mon Jan 11 09:21:39 2010 +0000
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-.\"    $NetBSD: rtsold.8,v 1.27 2006/10/13 21:07:34 wiz Exp $
+.\"    $NetBSD: rtsold.8,v 1.28 2010/01/11 09:21:39 mbalmer Exp $
 .\"    $KAME: rtsold.8,v 1.17 2001/07/09 22:30:37 itojun Exp $
 .\"
 .\" Copyright (C) 1995, 1996, 1997, and 1998 WIDE Project.
@@ -28,7 +28,7 @@
 .\" OUT OF THE USE OF THIS SOFTWARE, EVEN IF ADVISED OF THE POSSIBILITY OF
 .\" SUCH DAMAGE.
 .\"
-.Dd October 8, 2006
+.Dd January 11, 2010
 .Dt RTSOLD 8
 .Os
 .\"
@@ -81,7 +81,7 @@
 after one of the following events:
 .Bl -bullet
 .It
-Just after invocation of
+Just after invocation of the
 .Nm
 daemon.
 .It
@@ -102,7 +102,7 @@
 daemon cannot get the interface status.
 This feature does not conform to the IPv6 neighbor discovery
 specification, but is provided for mobile stations.
-The default interval for router advertisements, which is on the order of 10
+The default interval for router advertisements, which is in the order of 10
 minutes, is slightly long for mobile stations.
 This feature is provided
 for such stations so that they can find new routers as soon as possible
@@ -149,7 +149,7 @@
 .Nm
 finds multiple interfaces,
 .Nm
-will exit with error.
+will exit with an error.
 .It Fl D
 Enable more debugging (than that offered by the
 .Fl d
@@ -173,6 +173,7 @@
 Moreover, if the option is specified,
 .Nm
 periodically sends Router Solicitation on an interface that does not support
+the
 .Dv SIOCGIFMEDIA
 ioctl.
 .El
@@ -198,7 +199,7 @@
 .Nm
 command is based on the
 .Nm rtsol
-command, which first appeared in WIDE/KAME IPv6 protocol stack kit.
+command, which first appeared in the WIDE/KAME IPv6 protocol stack kit.
 .Nm rtsol
 is now integrated into
 .Nm .



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