[src/trunk]: src/share/man/man4 Various language fixes. From FreeBSD.

[mbalmer <mbalmer%NetBSD.org@localhost>]

details:   https://anonhg.NetBSD.org/src/rev/310d5fdce388
branches:  trunk
changeset: 750640:310d5fdce388
user:      mbalmer <mbalmer%NetBSD.org@localhost>
date:      Sat Jan 09 09:19:18 2010 +0000

description:
Various language fixes.  From FreeBSD.

diffstat:

 share/man/man4/faith.4 |  39 +++++++++++++++++++--------------------
 1 files changed, 19 insertions(+), 20 deletions(-)

diffs (93 lines):

diff -r 440f44bc035d -r 310d5fdce388 share/man/man4/faith.4
--- a/share/man/man4/faith.4    Sat Jan 09 09:16:32 2010 +0000
+++ b/share/man/man4/faith.4    Sat Jan 09 09:19:18 2010 +0000
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-.\"    $NetBSD: faith.4,v 1.10 2003/09/07 16:22:27 wiz Exp $
+.\"    $NetBSD: faith.4,v 1.11 2010/01/09 09:19:18 mbalmer Exp $
 .\"    $KAME: faith.4,v 1.10 2001/06/30 00:42:48 itojun Exp $
 .\"
 .\" Copyright (C) 1995, 1996, 1997, and 1998 WIDE Project.
@@ -53,15 +53,15 @@
 subcommands.
 .Pp
 Special action will be taken when IPv6 TCP traffic is seen on a router,
-and routing table suggests to route it to
+and the routing table suggests to route it to the
 .Nm
 interface.
 In this case, the packet will be accepted by the router,
-regardless of list of IPv6 interface addresses assigned to the router.
-The packet will be captured by an IPv6 TCP socket, if it has
+regardless of the list of IPv6 interface addresses assigned to the router.
+The packet will be captured by an IPv6 TCP socket, if it has the
 .Dv IN6P_FAITH
-flag turned on and it has matching address/port pairs.
-In result,
+flag turned on and matching address/port pairs.
+As a result,
 .Nm
 will let you capture IPv6 TCP traffic to some specific destination addresses.
 Userland programs, such as
@@ -73,43 +73,42 @@
 and perform application-specific address mapping to relay IPv6 TCP to IPv4 TCP.
 .Pp
 .Dv IN6P_FAITH
-flag on IPv6 TCP socket can be set by using
+flag on a IPv6 TCP socket can be set by using
 .Xr setsockopt 2 ,
-with level equals to
+with level
 .Dv IPPROTO_IPV6
-and optname equals to
+and optname
 .Dv IPv6_FAITH .
 .Pp
-To handle error reports by ICMPv6, some of ICMPv6 packets routed to
+To handle error reports by ICMPv6, some ICMPv6 packets routed to an
 .Nm
 interface will be delivered to IPv6 TCP, as well.
 .Pp
 To understand how
 .Nm
-can be used, take a look at source code of
+can be used, take a look at the source code of
 .Xr faithd 8 .
 .Pp
-As
+As the
 .Nm
-interface implements potentially dangerous operation,
-great care must be taken when configuring
-.Nm
-interface.
-To avoid possible misuse,
+interface implements potentially dangerous operations,
+great care must be taken when configuring it.
+To avoid possible misuse, the
 .Xr sysctl 8
 variable
 .Li net.inet6.ip6.keepfaith
 must be set to
 .Li 1
-prior to the use of the interface.
+prior to using the interface.
 When
 .Li net.inet6.ip6.keepfaith
 is
 .Li 0 ,
-no packet will be captured by
+no packets will be captured by the
 .Nm
 interface.
 .Pp
+The
 .Nm
 interface is intended to be used on routers, not on hosts.
 .\"
@@ -126,5 +125,5 @@
 .%D June 2001
 .Re
 .Sh HISTORY
-The FAITH IPv6-to-IPv4 TCP relay translator was first appeared in
+The FAITH IPv6-to-IPv4 TCP relay translator first appeared in the
 WIDE hydrangea IPv6 stack.