[src/trunk]: src/share/man/man4/man4.sandpoint Dd arguments should be full mo...

[wiz <wiz%NetBSD.org@localhost>]

details:   https://anonhg.NetBSD.org/src/rev/050434df36d3
branches:  trunk
changeset: 761430:050434df36d3
user:      wiz <wiz%NetBSD.org@localhost>
date:      Thu Jan 27 09:50:00 2011 +0000

description:
Dd arguments should be full month names; new sentence, new line;
add serial comma; remove trailing whitespace; avoid xref to itself.

diffstat:

 share/man/man4/man4.sandpoint/satmgr.4 |  31 ++++++++++++++++---------------
 1 files changed, 16 insertions(+), 15 deletions(-)

diffs (78 lines):

diff -r 0c2d7274d9e7 -r 050434df36d3 share/man/man4/man4.sandpoint/satmgr.4
--- a/share/man/man4/man4.sandpoint/satmgr.4    Thu Jan 27 09:46:59 2011 +0000
+++ b/share/man/man4/man4.sandpoint/satmgr.4    Thu Jan 27 09:50:00 2011 +0000
@@ -1,11 +1,10 @@
-.Dd Jan 26, 2011
+.\" $NetBSD: satmgr.4,v 1.2 2011/01/27 09:50:00 wiz Exp $
+.Dd January 26, 2011
 .Dt SATMGR 4 sandpoint
 .Os
 .Sh NAME
 .Nm satmgr
-.Nd
-driver for satellite processor, controlling power, front panel LEDs
-and buttons
+.Nd driver for satellite processor, controlling power, front panel LEDs, and buttons
 .Sh SYNOPSIS
 .Cd "satmgr0 at eumb? unit 0"
 .Cd "satmgr0 at eumb? unit 1"
@@ -13,8 +12,9 @@
 This driver provides an interface to the
 .Tn NAS
 builtin satellite microprocessor which controls the power, front
-panel LEDs and push buttons. Communication is performed through
-character sequences, whose definition and usage depend on the
+panel LEDs, and push buttons.
+Communication is performed through character sequences, whose
+definition and usage depend on the
 .Tn NAS
 product models.
 .Pp
@@ -30,21 +30,22 @@
 .Pp
 .Nm
 detects a soft power-off condition, which is triggered by holding
-the front panel power button pressed for several seconds.  This
-driver can optionally invoke
+the front panel power button pressed for several seconds.
+This driver can optionally invoke
 .Xr powerd 8
-to get a finer control over the system shutdown procedure. It is
-capable of reporting a power-button-pressed event. Refer to the
+to get a finer control over the system shutdown procedure.
+It is capable of reporting a power-button-pressed event.
+Refer to the
 .Xr powerd 8
 manual section for more details.
 .Pp
 For
 .Tn "Kurobox/Linkstation"
 .Tn NAS
-products it also provides a way to
-toggle the system watchdog with the
+products it also provides a way to toggle the system watchdog with the
 .Xr sysctl 8
-utility. The usage is:
+utility.
+The usage is:
 .Bd -literal -offset indent
 # sysctl -w machdep.satmgr.hwwdog_enable=1
 # sysctl -w machdep.satmgr.hwwdog_enable=0
@@ -52,7 +53,7 @@
 .Pp
 .Tn NAS
 products currently supported by
-.Xr satmgr 4 :
+.Nm :
 .Bl -bullet -compact
 .It
 KuroBox
@@ -71,7 +72,7 @@
 .Xr powerd 8 .
 .El
 .Sh SEE ALSO
-.Xr powerd 8 
+.Xr powerd 8
 .Sh HISTORY
 The
 .Nm