[src/trunk]: src/share/man/man4 - improve wording

[wiz <wiz%NetBSD.org@localhost>]

details:   https://anonhg.NetBSD.org/src/rev/85d44edb30b3
branches:  trunk
changeset: 569794:85d44edb30b3
user:      wiz <wiz%NetBSD.org@localhost>
date:      Mon Sep 06 12:52:54 2004 +0000

description:
- improve wording
- fix some grammar errors
- fix capitalization
By Christian Brueffer in PR 26859.

diffstat:

 share/man/man4/cnw.4 |  12 ++++++------
 1 files changed, 6 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)

diffs (43 lines):

diff -r d96c789a2254 -r 85d44edb30b3 share/man/man4/cnw.4
--- a/share/man/man4/cnw.4      Mon Sep 06 12:38:17 2004 +0000
+++ b/share/man/man4/cnw.4      Mon Sep 06 12:52:54 2004 +0000
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-.\"    $NetBSD: cnw.4,v 1.12 2001/09/12 18:19:17 wiz Exp $
+.\"    $NetBSD: cnw.4,v 1.13 2004/09/06 12:52:54 wiz Exp $
 .\"
 .\" Copyright (c) 1997 Berkeley Software Design, Inc. All rights reserved.
 .\"
@@ -41,7 +41,7 @@
 .Sh NAME
 .Nm cnw
 .Nd
-.Tn Netwave AirSurfer Wireless network driver
+.Tn Netwave AirSurfer wireless network driver
 .Sh SYNOPSIS
 .Cd "cnw*     at pcmcia? function ?"
 .Sh DESCRIPTION
@@ -59,9 +59,9 @@
 .Xr awi 4
 driver.
 .Pp
-Netwave devices are not compatible with IEEE 802.11 wireless network.
+Netwave devices are not compatible with IEEE 802.11 wireless networks.
 Also note that there are Netwave devices with different wireless frequency,
-depending on radio band plan in each countries.
+depending on the radio band plan in each country.
 .Pp
 The card uses 36K of I/O memory mapped to the card.
 .\"The card uses 32K of I/O memory mapped to the card along with either 16 I/O ports
@@ -79,10 +79,10 @@
 from microwaves, IEEE 802.11 wireless network devices, as well as earth.
 For example, it seems that IEEE 802.11 channel 14 conflicts with Netwave
 .Pq US frequency .
-They interfere each other if we operate both of them
+They interfere with each other if they are both operated
 in the same geographic region, causing weird packet loss.
 You may be able to avoid the interference with IEEE 802.11 devices,
-by changing IEEE 802.11 channel.
+by changing the IEEE 802.11 channel.
 .Sh HARDWARE
 Cards supported by the
 .Nm