[src/trunk]: src/share/man/man4 Long month name in Dd, grammar improvements, ...

[wiz <wiz%NetBSD.org@localhost>]

details:   https://anonhg.NetBSD.org/src/rev/f79f4d698ae4
branches:  trunk
changeset: 582935:f79f4d698ae4
user:      wiz <wiz%NetBSD.org@localhost>
date:      Tue Jul 12 07:33:39 2005 +0000

description:
Long month name in Dd, grammar improvements, formatting improvement, sort
SEE ALSO, end sentence with a dot.

diffstat:

 share/man/man4/sbp.4 |  16 ++++++++--------
 1 files changed, 8 insertions(+), 8 deletions(-)

diffs (54 lines):

diff -r c177651f3361 -r f79f4d698ae4 share/man/man4/sbp.4
--- a/share/man/man4/sbp.4      Tue Jul 12 07:31:57 2005 +0000
+++ b/share/man/man4/sbp.4      Tue Jul 12 07:33:39 2005 +0000
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-.\"    $NetBSD: sbp.4,v 1.1 2005/07/11 15:37:00 kiyohara Exp $
+.\"    $NetBSD: sbp.4,v 1.2 2005/07/12 07:33:39 wiz Exp $
 .\"
 .\" Copyright (c) 2005 KIYOHARA Takashi
 .\" All rights reserved.
@@ -36,7 +36,7 @@
 .\"
 .\" $FreeBSD: /repoman/r/ncvs/src/share/man/man4/sbp.4,v 1.11 2004/06/16 08:33:54 ru Exp $
 .\"
-.Dd Jun 18, 2005
+.Dd June 18, 2005
 .Dt SBP 4
 .Os
 .Sh NAME
@@ -48,10 +48,10 @@
 The
 .Nm
 driver provides support for SBP-2 devices that attach to the IEEE1394 port.
-It should work with SBP-2 devices which the
+It should work with all SBP-2 devices which the
 .Xr scsi 4
 layer supports, for example,
-HDDs, CDROM drives and DVD drives.
+HDDs, CDROM drives, and DVD drives.
 .Pp
 Some users familiar with
 .Xr umass 4
@@ -64,13 +64,13 @@
 cannot be probed correctly for some reason after a bus reset or when the
 device is temporary disconnected because the user changes the bus topology.
 If you want to force to detach the device, run
-.Dq Nm fwctl Fl r
+.Ic fwctl -r
 several times.
 .Sh SEE ALSO
+.Xr ieee1394if 4 ,
 .Xr scsi 4 ,
-.Xr ieee1394if 4 ,
+.Xr fwctl 8 ,
 .Xr scsictl 8 ,
-.Xr fwctl 8 ,
 .Xr sysctl 8
 .Sh AUTHORS
 .An -nosplit
@@ -86,4 +86,4 @@
 It was added to
 .Nx 4.0
 by
-.An KIYOHARA Takashi
+.An KIYOHARA Takashi .