wip/p5-FCGI-Daemon: betetr grammar

[Adrian Steinmann (via pkgsrc-wip) <commit-notify%pkgsrc.org@localhost>]

Module Name:	pkgsrc-wip
Committed By:	Adrian Steinmann <ast%NetBSD.org@localhost>
Pushed By:	ast
Date:		Mon Sep 1 09:50:44 2025 +0200
Changeset:	05aa19fbfc716596e853bff8d46692bcd97919c8

Modified Files:
	p5-FCGI-Daemon/DESCR

Log Message:
wip/p5-FCGI-Daemon: betetr grammar

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diffstat:
 p5-FCGI-Daemon/DESCR | 13 ++++---------
 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 9 deletions(-)

diffs:
diff --git a/p5-FCGI-Daemon/DESCR b/p5-FCGI-Daemon/DESCR
index 9305022ef3..77a3bfabce 100644
--- a/p5-FCGI-Daemon/DESCR
+++ b/p5-FCGI-Daemon/DESCR
@@ -1,17 +1,12 @@
 FCGI::Daemon is a small FastCGI server for use as CGI-wrapper for
 CGI applications.
 
-Like mod_perl FCGI-Daemon stay persistent in memory and accelerate
+Like mod_perl, FCGI-Daemon stays persistent in memory to accelerate
 unmodified CGI applications written in Perl.
 
 FCGI-Daemon run CGI scripts with RLIMITs and predefined number of
 workers.
 
-It was developed as replacement for cgiwrap-fcgi.pl
-(http://wiki.nginx.org/SimpleCGI) and fcgiwrap
-(http://nginx.localdomain.pl/wiki/FcgiWrap).
-
-FCGI-Daemon check for executable in path and correctly set PATH_INFO
-environment variable which is crucial for some CGI applications
-like fossil (http://fossil-scm.org). (Lack of this functionality
-make cgiwrap-fcgi.pl unsuitable for some scripts.)
+FCGI-Daemon checks for executable in path and correctly sets
+PATH_INFO environment variable which is crucial for some CGI
+applications like fossil (http://fossil-scm.org).