Re: Typo(s) in Chapter 32 of The NetBSD Guide

[christos%astron.com@localhost (Christos Zoulas)]

In article <20210503085018.7odxpgeylafcjnfj@delpotro>,
Rocky Hotas  <rockyhotas%firemail.cc@localhost> wrote:
>Hello!
>In Section 32.1 of The NetBSD Guide,
>
> <http://www.netbsd.org/docs/guide/en/chap-build.html#chap-build-tools>
>
>consider the sentence:
>
>``The "-a evbarm -m aarch64" options indicate we are building for a
>machine type of evbarm with a CPU type of aarch64''.
>
>`-m' and `-a' swapped. It should be:
>
>``The "-m evbarm -a aarch64" options indicate we are building for a     
>machine type of evbarm with a CPU type of aarch64''.
>
>I would suggest another modification, even if this is more arbitrary.
>In Section 32.4,
>
> <http://www.netbsd.org/docs/guide/en/chap-build.html#chap-boot-cross-build-kernel>
>
>the sentence
>
>``Once the kernel is built, build.sh will print out the location of it
>along with other information''.
>
>would maybe sound better if changed this way:
>
>``Once the kernel is built, build.sh will print out its location,
>along with other information''.

Fixed, thanks!

christos