Subject: Re: call for volunteers: update flyer
To: None <netbsd-docs@netbsd.org>
From: James K. Lowden <jklowden@schemamania.org>
List: netbsd-docs
Date: 07/10/2005 14:28:58
Jan Schaumann wrote:
> The flyer is available at http://www.netbsd.org/gallery/advocacy/#flyers
> in .tex format -- if somebody could take a look at this and bring it up
> to date and send me patches, that would be great!

Does this line say what we want it to say?  

"NetBSD is designed to minimize the
effort of making it run on new hardware, and as a result you are able
to concentrate on the development of the hardware."

I would think the more common use is to *exploit* the hardware, not
develop it.  

Maybe this is a little OT here, but it's particular to this flyer....

--jkl