Subject: Questions about the NetBSD 2.0.2 RA
To: None <netbsd-docs@NetBSD.org>
From: Mike M. Volokhov <mishka@apk.od.ua>
List: netbsd-docs
Date: 04/19/2005 15:04:45
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Greetings!

While working on translation I found numerous neglects. Some of them,
such as uncion and command names, which should looks like XML entities,
and few misspelings are collected in my patch (see attachment named
en-2.0.2.patch.gz). Another approach is a document formatting. Seems
some bomb has been exploded here. :-O


Regarding to text, could anybody explain me meaning of the following
paragraph:

``Your generous donation would be particularly welcome at this point in
time, since the release engineering process for NetBSD 2.0 was
unfortunately set back by hardware failures on the build machines,
necessitating the immediate replacement of the equipment.''

Does this mean, that "since not so long time ago the release
engineering process ... was set back by hardware failures" or how?

My second trouble is the following two items at list:

``(1) Prevent deadlock/panic on NFS clients after NFS server reboots and
caches aren't in sync. (2) NFS fixes to address incorrect atimes
updates and cache coherency issues.''

Both items describe a problems with NFS cache. Is these different bugs
or not?


Next, for quoting we everywhere use DocBook construction based on
<note/>, i.e.:

	<note><title/>
	<para>...</para>
	</note>

Why not use <blockquote/> tags instead?

--
Best wishes,
Mishka.


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