Subject: Re: FFS soft-dependencies in chap-boot?
To: None <daniel@evilbsd.net>
From: Hiroki Sato <hrs@NetBSD.org>
List: netbsd-docs
Date: 01/15/2004 03:26:39
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Hi,

 A few very minor things, but I have some comments:

 +    <screen>
 +/dev/wd0a / ffs rw 1 1
 +/dev/wd0b none swap sw 0 0
 +/dev/wd0e /var ffs rw 1 2
 +/dev/wd0f /tmp ffs rw 1 2
 +/dev/wd0g /usr ffs rw 1 2
 +    </screen>

  <screen></screen> should not have heading/trailing spaces.

 +  <ulink url="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/File_system">http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/File_system</ulink>
 +	</para>

  <ulink url="URL">URL</ulink> can be <ulink url="URL"></ulink> (or 
  <ulink url="URL" />).  I think the latter makes the maintenance easier.

-- 
| Hiroki SATO

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