Subject: chap-intro diff: chapter still refers to NetBSD 1.4.1
To: None <netbsd-docs@netbsd.org>
From: Daniel de Kok <blowgish@freeshell.org>
List: netbsd-docs
Date: 08/13/2003 09:06:22
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Hi all,  
   
While working on the translation I noticed that there is still a
reference to NetBSD 1.4.1 and the number of supported platforms
mentioned is far to low;). I attached a diff that should make
chap-intro more immune to the platform explosion;).

With kind regards,
Daniel de Kok

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--- chap-intro.xml.old	2003-08-13 10:22:58.000000000 +0200
+++ chap-intro.xml	2003-08-13 10:44:15.000000000 +0200
@@ -62,7 +62,7 @@
     <itemizedlist>
       <listitem>
         <para>
-          Portability (more than 20 platforms are supported)
+          Portability (more than 50 platforms are supported)
         </para>
       </listitem>
       <listitem>
@@ -116,93 +116,11 @@
     <title>Supported platforms</title>
     
     <para>
-      NetBSD 1.4.1 supports the following platforms (you can find the
-      technical details for all of them on the NetBSD site)
+      NetBSD supports over 50 platforms, including the popular
+      i386, sparc, sparc64, alpha, mac68k and macppc platforms. 
+      Technical details for all of them on the NetBSD site)
     </para>
     
-    <itemizedlist>
-      <listitem>
-        <para>
-          Digital Alpha (64bit) 
-        </para>
-      </listitem>
-      <listitem>
-        <para>
-          Commodore Amiga, MacroSystem DraCo 
-        </para>
-      </listitem>
-      <listitem>
-        <para>
-          Acorn RiscPC/A7000, CATS, Digital Shark, EBSA-285, VLSI RC7500 
-        </para>
-      </listitem>
-      <listitem>
-        <para>
-          Atari TT030, Falcon, Hades 
-        </para>
-      </listitem>
-      <listitem>
-        <para>
-          Hewlett-Packard 9000/300 and 400 
-        </para>
-      </listitem>
-      <listitem>
-        <para>
-          i386 family IBM PCs and clones 
-        </para>
-      </listitem>
-      <listitem>
-        <para>
-          Apple Macintosh 
-        </para>
-      </listitem>
-      <listitem>
-        <para>
-          Apple Power Macintosh 
-        </para>
-      </listitem>
-      <listitem>
-        <para>
-          Motorola MVME 68k SBCs 
-        </para>
-      </listitem>
-      <listitem>
-        <para>
-          NeXT 68k 'black' hardware 
-        </para>
-      </listitem>
-      <listitem>
-        <para>
-          The PC532 
-        </para>
-      </listitem>
-      <listitem>
-        <para>
-          Digital MIPS-based DECstations and DECsystems 
-        </para>
-      </listitem>
-      <listitem>
-        <para>
-          Sun SPARC 
-        </para>
-      </listitem>
-      <listitem>
-        <para>
-          Sun 3 and Sun3x 
-        </para>
-      </listitem>
-      <listitem>
-        <para>
-          Digital VAX 
-        </para>
-      </listitem>
-      <listitem>
-        <para>
-          Sharp X680x0 
-        </para>
-      </listitem>
-    </itemizedlist>
-    
   </sect1>
   
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