PR/58063 CVS commit: htdocs/docs/guide/en

["Taylor R Campbell" <riastradh%netbsd.org@localhost>]

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From: "Taylor R Campbell" <riastradh%netbsd.org@localhost>
To: gnats-bugs%gnats.NetBSD.org@localhost
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Subject: PR/58063 CVS commit: htdocs/docs/guide/en
Date: Thu, 28 Mar 2024 14:57:21 +0000

 Module Name:	htdocs
 Committed By:	riastradh
 Date:		Thu Mar 28 14:57:21 UTC 2024
 
 Modified Files:
 	htdocs/docs/guide/en: chap-net-services.xml
 
 Log Message:
 docs/guide/en/chap-net-services: Clarify NFS security model.
 
 Tidy up a little bit while here:
 
 - fix some punctuation
 - say `file system' consistently, not `filesystem'
 - suggest `service mountd reload', not `kill -HUP $(cat ...)'
 - clarify metasyntactic variables
 
 PR misc/58063
 
 
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