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misc/55294: change a file name etc. in docs/guide/en/chap-cons.xml



>Number:         55294
>Category:       misc
>Synopsis:       change a file name etc. in docs/guide/en/chap-cons.xml
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    misc-bug-people
>State:          open
>Class:          doc-bug
>Submitter-Id:   net
>Arrival-Date:   Sun May 24 13:05:00 +0000 2020
>Originator:     KIRIHARA Masaharu
>Release:        N/A
>Organization:
>Environment:
N/A
>Description:
In line 66, I think rc.wscons is not used in the current version.

In line 29, 'w' should be uppercase.(?)
In line 138-139, I'm afraid that it's not necessary to modify it because I'm not a native speaker.

If some/all of my modification are wrong, I apologize for sending this PR.



--- chap-cons.xml.orig
+++ chap-cons.xml
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-<!-- $NetBSD: chap-cons.xml,v 1.14 2019/04/20 08:23:24 maya Exp $ -->
+<!-- $NetBSD: $ -->

 <chapter id="chap-cons">
   <title>Console drivers</title>
@@ -26,7 +26,7 @@
       similar, depending on the platform.
     </para>

-    <para>wscons comprises three subsystems: wsdisplay, wskbd and wsmouse.
+    <para>Wscons comprises three subsystems: wsdisplay, wskbd and wsmouse.
     These subsystems handle abstraction for all display, keyboard and mouse
     devices respectively.  The following sections discuss the configuration
     of wscons per subsystem.</para>
@@ -43,7 +43,7 @@
        <title>Virtual consoles</title>

        <para>The number of pre-allocated virtual console is controlled by the
-       following option</para>
+       following kernel configuration option</para>

        <programlisting>options     WSDISPLAY_DEFAULTSCREENS=4</programlisting>

@@ -56,14 +56,14 @@
        <programlisting># screens to create
 #       idx     screen  emul
 #screen 0       -       vt100
-screen 1        -       vt100
-screen 2        -       vt100
-screen 3        -       vt100
+screen  1       -       vt100
+screen  2       -       vt100
+screen  3       -       vt100
 screen  4       -       -
 #screen 4       80x25bf vt100
 #screen 5       80x50   vt100</programlisting>

-        <para>The <filename>rc.wscons</filename> script transforms each of the non
+        <para>The <filename>/etc/rc.d/wscons</filename> script transforms each of the non
        commented lines in a call to the <command>wsconscfg</command> command:
        the columns become the parameters of the call.  The
        <emphasis>idx</emphasis> column becomes the <option>index</option>
@@ -135,8 +135,8 @@
          <title>Getting rid of the message <computeroutput>WSDISPLAYIO_ADDSCREEN: Device busy</computeroutput></title>

          <para>This error message usually occurs when wsconscfg tries
-         to add a screen which already exists.  One time this occurs
-         is if you have a <option>screen 0</option> line in your
+         to add a screen which already exists.  This occurs
+         if you have a <option>screen 0</option> line in your
          <filename>/etc/wscons.conf</filename> file, because the
          kernel always allocates a screen 0 as the console device.
          The error message is harmless in this case, and you can get
@@ -471,9 +471,9 @@
        <option>options PCKBD_LAYOUT=KB_<parameter>encoding</parameter></option>
        where <emphasis>encoding</emphasis> is an uppercase entry
        from the list above
-       (eg: <option>PCKBD_LAYOUT=KB_FR</option>). Variants can be
+       (e.g.: <option>PCKBD_LAYOUT=KB_FR</option>). Variants can be
        bitwise or'd in
-       (eg: <option>PCKBD_LAYOUT=KB_US|KB_SWAPCTRLCAPS</option>).</para>
+       (e.g.: <option>PCKBD_LAYOUT=KB_US|KB_SWAPCTRLCAPS</option>).</para>

        <para>Configuring the keyboard layout under X is described
        <ulink url="http://www.NetBSD.org/docs/x/#x-keyboard-maps";>elsewhere</ulink>.

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