Subject: misc/27219: Some fixes for BUILDING.mdoc
To: None <gnats-bugs@gnats.NetBSD.org>
From: None <keramida@freebsd.org>
List: netbsd-bugs
Date: 10/10/2004 23:58:43
>Number:         27219
>Category:       misc
>Synopsis:       Some fixes for BUILDING.mdoc
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    misc-bug-people
>State:          open
>Class:          doc-bug
>Submitter-Id:   net
>Arrival-Date:   Sun Oct 10 23:59:00 UTC 2004
>Closed-Date:
>Last-Modified:
>Originator:     Giorgos Keramidas
>Release:        
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>Description:
The BUILDING.mdoc source can be improved a bit in a few places.

I've corrected a couple of typos and reworded 2 sentences to improve their clarity (imho).

See attached diff, or if that comes out mangled because of the web form get it from
http://people.freebsd.org/~keramida/diff/BUILDING.patch

>How-To-Repeat:

>Fix:
--- BUILDING.mdoc.orig  Mon Oct 11 02:37:42 2004
+++ BUILDING.mdoc       Mon Oct 11 02:46:03 2004
@@ -471,14 +471,14 @@
 .YorN
 Indicates whether an unprivileged install will occur.
 The user, group, permissions, and file flags, will not be set on
-the installed item; instead the information will be appended to
+the installed items; instead the information will be appended to
 a file called
 .Pa METALOG
 in
 .Sy DESTDIR .
 The contents of
 .Pa METALOG
-is used during the generation of the distribution tar files to ensure
+are used during the generation of the distribution tar files to ensure
 that the appropriate file ownership is stored.
 .DFLTn
 .
@@ -665,7 +665,7 @@
 .Sh BUILDING
 .
 .Ss \*qmake\*q command line options
-This is only a summary of options available to
+This is not a summary of all the options available to
 .Xr make 1 ;
 only the options used most frequently with
 .Nx
@@ -678,7 +678,7 @@
 .Ar njob
 .Xr make 1 
 subjobs in parallel.
-Makefiles should use .WAIT or have explicit dependancies 
+Makefiles should use .WAIT or have explicit dependencies
 as necessary to enforce build ordering.
 If you see build failures with -j, please save complete build logs 
 so the failures can be analyzed.
@@ -847,7 +847,7 @@
 (which defaults to the root directory).
 Ensures that
 .Sy INSTALLWORLDDIR
-is the not root directory if cross compiling.
+is not the root directory if cross compiling.
 .Pp
 .Em Note :
 It is highly recommended that you upgrade your kernel and reboot

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