Subject: Re: NetBSD promo material updated
To: Hubert Feyrer <email@example.com>
From: Stephen Borrill <firstname.lastname@example.org>
Date: 03/14/2006 13:38:38
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On Sun, 12 Mar 2006, Hubert Feyrer wrote:
> Working with Stefan Schumacher,Joerg Pernfuss and Rainer Brinkm=F6ller, I=
> updated some of the stuff in the NetBSD advocacy gallery at=20
> * There's a new DIN A4 flyer about Xen on NetBSD, in german and english
The opening sentence is vague. "Xen is an open source virtual machine=20
monitor for x86 hardware initially developed at University of Cambridge".=
It doesn't only work on x86 hardware initially developed at the Uni...
Perhaps a sentence break:
"Xen is an open source virtual machine monitor for x86 hardware. It was=20
initially developed at University of Cambridge."