CVS commit: htdocs/releases/formal-5

[Mindaugas Rasiukevicius <rmind%netbsd.org@localhost>]

Module Name:    htdocs
Committed By:   rmind
Date:           Tue Nov 25 23:07:38 UTC 2008

Modified Files:
        htdocs/releases/formal-5: NetBSD-5.0.xml

Log Message:
- Many wording improvements by <snj>.
- Add few suggestions from <tron> and <ad>.
- Swap the paragraphs, as suggested by <snj>.


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cvs rdiff -r1.3 -r1.4 htdocs/releases/formal-5/NetBSD-5.0.xml

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