Feedback on Draft

[Shalom Ray <shalomray7%gmail.com@localhost>]

Dear Sir/Madam,

Good day! Hope you are doing fine. I have shared my draft with the
organization. Following are the details -

Project: Inetd enhancements -- Add new features to inetd
Organization: The NetBSD foundation
Link: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1J_jsFQjIB4e3HSjsVEyhsGh81tRKsLBKfKqK4EREVHY/edit?usp=sharing

I would be forever grateful if you could provide feedback and help me
improve my proposal. Looking forward to your reply.

Best Regards,
Shalom Rachapudi