On Sat, 29 Jul 2006 19:14:34 +0200
"Julio M. Merino Vidal" <jmmv84@gmail.com> wrote:
> What do you think about this?

I like it.  Some minor suggestions:

+This system is running a beta release of the NetBSD operating system
+aimed at stabilizing the next formal release.  It is close to formal
+release quality but it is still possible that it contains serious bugs
+or any other kind of problem.  Please bear this in mind and use the
+system with care.

"...that it contains bugs, perhaps even serious ones."

+This system is running a release candidate release of the NetBSD
+operating system aimed at shaking out the most serious bugs that may
+affect the next formal release.  It is very close to formal release
+quality but it is still possible that it contains bugs.

"...running a release candidate of the NetBSD..."


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D'Arcy J.M. Cain <darcy@NetBSD.org>
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