Subject: Re: proofreading pkgsrc flyers
To: Stefan 'Kaishakunin' Schumacher <firstname.lastname@example.org>
From: david.aubril <email@example.com>
Date: 02/17/2007 09:05:29
Three things :
1°) "Those packages are uploaded to _ftp.pkgsrc.org _and freely
available to all pkgsrc users."
Well, what is that ftp ? where do you find it ?
2°) In the english version, there is some german text under the pictures
( page 1 ). You show a screenshot of pkg_select, but you don't mention
it in page 2, "Additional Programs".
3°) "To install a package, simply enter the speciﬁc directory and type
make install clean"
Actually, it might be better to type "make install clean clean-depends".
Stefan 'Kaishakunin' Schumacher wrote:
> I've created two flyers to advocate pkgsrc, one in German and another
> in English. Contents are the same. However, I would prefer if someone
> would proofread them.
> Send updates via mail.