Subject: Re: proofreading pkgsrc flyers
To: Stefan 'Kaishakunin' Schumacher <firstname.lastname@example.org>
From: Jeremy C. Reed <email@example.com>
Date: 02/16/2007 11:38:33
On Fri, 16 Feb 2007, Stefan 'Kaishakunin' Schumacher wrote:
> I've created two flyers to advocate pkgsrc, one in German and another
> in English. Contents are the same. However, I would prefer if someone
> would proofread them.
> Send updates via mail.
Stefan, thank you for your advocacy work!
Also this is the first time I saw a screenshot of pkg_select. That
screenshot looked bad, but when I zoomed in it was clear.
The English document has German descriptions for images.
Also "skript" should be "script" on the English document.
As for the OpenPGP signatures info -- is that really for integrity of
"source files"? I thought it was for signed packages.
Also the term "cronable" may be misunderstood or unknown to novices --
maybe say "This task can be automated with cron and can improve ..."
The "pkg_view" feature doesn't setup a chroot environment (but symlinks).
(When I last tested, building pkgviews packages didn't work for me -- but
someone more recent wrote that he was using it. I asked him how, but never
Also change "everydays business" to "everyday business".
Jeremy C. Reed