CVS commit: pkgsrc/editors/emacs

["David H. Gutteridge" <gutteridge%netbsd.org@localhost>]

Module Name:    pkgsrc
Committed By:   gutteridge
Date:           Thu Oct  8 00:15:35 UTC 2020

Modified Files:
        pkgsrc/editors/emacs: modules.mk

Log Message:
emacs: amend comments in modules.mk

Update a (self-referencing) comment to reflect the current name and
location, and misc. grammar, style, and consistency fixes.


To generate a diff of this commit:
cvs rdiff -u -r1.28 -r1.29 pkgsrc/editors/emacs/modules.mk

Please note that diffs are not public domain; they are subject to the
copyright notices on the relevant files.

Modified files:

Index: pkgsrc/editors/emacs/modules.mk
diff -u pkgsrc/editors/emacs/modules.mk:1.28 pkgsrc/editors/emacs/modules.mk:1.29
--- pkgsrc/editors/emacs/modules.mk:1.28        Sun Sep  6 02:59:16 2020
+++ pkgsrc/editors/emacs/modules.mk     Thu Oct  8 00:15:35 2020
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-# $NetBSD: modules.mk,v 1.28 2020/09/06 02:59:16 ryoon Exp $
+# $NetBSD: modules.mk,v 1.29 2020/10/08 00:15:35 gutteridge Exp $
 #
 # This Makefile fragment handles Emacs Lisp Packages (== ELPs).
 #
@@ -15,16 +15,16 @@
 #      * You can't install an ELP for both Emacs and XEmacs
 #        simultaneously.
 #
-#      * XEmacs package's names are prefix'ed by "xemacs-".
+#      * XEmacs packages' names are prefixed by "xemacs-".
 #
 # Note to package developers:
 #
-#      * XEmacs package's names are prefix'ed by "xemacs-".
+#      * XEmacs packages' names are prefixed by "xemacs-".
 #
 #        This is to make sure ELPs for XEmacs keep their own dependency
-#        tree (for example, if an ELP "bar" depends on another ELP "foo",
+#        tree. For example, if an ELP "bar" depends on another ELP "foo",
 #        "xemacs-bar" depends on "xemacs-foo".  "foo" (installed for GNU
-#        Emacs) is useless for "xemacs-bar" in this case.).
+#        Emacs) is useless for "xemacs-bar" in this case.
 #
 #        Make sure too that "foo" and "xemacs-foo" conflict each other,
 #        since they can share some files.  (Making all ELPs separately
@@ -32,7 +32,7 @@
 #
 #      * Assume each ELP supports all Emacs versions by default.  If the
 #        ELP supports only certain Emacs versions, define EMACS_VERSIONS
-#        _ACCEPTED explicitly before including mk/emacs.mk.
+#        _ACCEPTED explicitly before including emacs/modules.mk.
 #
 # Variables for users:
 #
@@ -110,7 +110,7 @@
 #              Description:
 #                      Path to the directory Info files should be
 #                      installed into.  Unlike EMACS_ETCPREFIX or
-#                      EMACS_LISPPREFIX, subdirectory is not needed.
+#                      EMACS_LISPPREFIX, a subdirectory is not needed.
 #              Possible values:
 #                      ${PREFIX}/${PKGINFODIR}
 #                      ${PREFIX}/lib/xemacs/site-packages/info
@@ -264,13 +264,13 @@ _EMACS_CONFLICTS.xemacs=  ${PKGBASE:C|^xe
 #
 # Version decision
 #
-# 1. Pick up an emacs version.
+# 1. Pick up an Emacs version.
 #
 #      add a dependency to the version;
 #
-# 2. Check if a given package can be used for the emacs version.
+# 2. Check if a given package can be used for the Emacs version.
 #
-#      if (package accepts the emacs version)
+#      if (package accepts the Emacs version)
 #              nothing to do;
 #      else
 #              abort;
@@ -354,7 +354,7 @@ PRINT_PLIST_AWK+=   { gsub(/${EMACS_LISPPR
 
 .if defined(EMACS_BUILDLINK)
 _EMACS_DIR=    ${BUILDLINK_DIR}/share/emacs
-#  development version usually claims three digit, say, 27.0.50 etc
+# A development version usually claims three digits, say, 27.0.50 etc.
 .  if ${EMACS_TYPE} == emacs28
 ALL_ENV+=      EMACSLOADPATH=${_EMACS_DIR}/${_EMACS_VERSION_MAJOR}.${_EMACS_VERSION_MINOR}.${_EMACS_VERSION_MICRO}/lisp:${_EMACS_DIR}/site-lisp
 .  else