Subject: Re: NetBSD flyer caveats
To: None <netbsd-docs@NetBSD.org>
From: Mike M. Volokhov <email@example.com>
Date: 07/31/2005 18:56:28
On Wed, 27 Jul 2005 19:10:02 -0400
"James K. Lowden" <firstname.lastname@example.org> wrote:
> Mike M. Volokhov wrote:
> > Some of our developers are professional consultants. In case you do need
> > help, you can sign them up at short notice or for bigger projects.
> > Is that text (second sentence) correct? If yes, could anybody explain
> > it for us, please?
> That's my rendering, although I'm not really satisfied with it. The fact
> that it's not clear to you is reason enough to rewrite it.
> Perhaps something like this, instead:
> "If you find your project would benefit from an expert hand, you'll be
> pleased to know that some of our developers are professional consultants.
> They are available for projects large and small, often on short notice."
Thanks for explaination!
I'm sure there are all my not so good English knowledge :(
Just left it as is.