Subject: Patch against the Guide's RAIDFrame chapter
To: NetBSD Docs <>
From: Ceri Davies <>
List: netbsd-docs
Date: 12/11/2004 13:42:23
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One spellchecker error, one misuse of an apostrophe, one rewording.



PS If I should be send-pring these instead, just let me know ;-)
Only two things are infinite, the universe and human stupidity, and I'm
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Index: chap-rf.xml
RCS file: /a/NetBSD/ncvs/htdocs/guide/en/chap-rf.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.23
diff -u -r1.23 chap-rf.xml
--- chap-rf.xml	24 Nov 2004 12:58:43 -0000	1.23
+++ chap-rf.xml	11 Dec 2004 13:36:25 -0000
@@ -219,9 +219,9 @@
       <title>Power Redundancy and Disk Caching</title>
-      <para>If your system has an Uninterpretable Power Supply (UPS),
+      <para>If your system has an Uninterruptible Power Supply (UPS),
       and/or if your system has redundant power supplies, you should
-      consider enabling the read and write cache's on your drives.  On
+      consider enabling the read and write caches on your drives.  On
       systems with redundant power, this will improve drive performance.
       On systems without redundant power, the write cache could endanger
       the integrity of RAID data in the event of a power loss.</para>
@@ -833,7 +833,7 @@
 fifo 100
-        <para>Note that <filename>wd9</filename> is a non-existing disk.
+        <para>Note that <filename>wd9</filename> is a non-existent disk.
         This will allow us to  establish the RAID volume with a bogus
         component that we will substitute for  Disk0/wd0 at a later
         time.  Regardless, a device node in <filename>/dev</filename>


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