Hi all,

While translating chap-audio.sgml of the Short Guide I noticed some parag=
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wich are, in my humble opinion;), not entirely correct. Should I send dif=
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to this mailinglist, Frederico Lupi, www@ or using send-pr? For this time=
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I'll post them here...

With kind regards,
Daniel de Kok

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--- chap-audio.sgml.orig=09Mon Feb  3 18:36:54 2003
+++ chap-audio.sgml=09Mon Feb  3 18:41:27 2003
@@ -78,19 +78,19 @@
     </para>
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     <para>
-      ISA cards are usually more tricky to configure mostly because
-      of the interaction with the BIOS of the computer.
+      ISA Plug and Play cards are usually more tricky to configure
+      mostly because of the interaction with the BIOS of the computer.
     </para>
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     <para>
       On the newer machines (those produced after 1997) there is a
       BIOS option which causes many headaches for the configuration
-      of ISA audio cards (but not only audio cards): this option is
-      usually named <quote>PNP OS Installed</quote> and is commonly
-      found in the <quote>PNP/PCI Configuration</quote> (the names
-      can be different in your BIOS.)
-      As a general rule it is usually better to disable (i.e. set
-      it to <quote>NO</quote>) this option for NetBSD.
+      of ISA Plug and Play audio cards (but not only audio cards):
+      this option is usually named <quote>PNP OS Installed</quote>
+      and is commonly found in the <quote>PNP/PCI Configuration</quote>
+      (the names can be different in your BIOS.) As a general rule it is
+      usually better to disable (i.e. set it to <quote>NO</quote>) this
+      option for NetBSD.
     </para>
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     <note>
@@ -180,11 +180,8 @@
     </para>
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     <para>
-      Many PCs don't have a sound card but an integrated audio
-      chipset; this means that the chipset is installed on the
-      motherboard.
-      These are not enabled in the GENERIC kernel and you'll have
-      to compile a custom kernel in order to use them.
+      Plug and Play soundcards are not enabled in the GENERIC kernel
+      and you'll have to compile a custom kernel in order to use them.
       Look for the following (or similar) lines in the GENERIC
       file:
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@@ -216,7 +213,7 @@
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     <para>
       Sometimes it is necessary to setup manually the IRQ and DMA
-      for the device.
+      for non-PnP ISA cards.
     </para>
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     <para>
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