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misc/39958: amdtemp(4) man page: wording and wrong reference
>Synopsis: amdtemp(4) man page: wording and wrong reference
>Arrival-Date: Wed Nov 19 13:20:00 +0000 2008
>Originator: Joerg Niendorf
In the DESCRIPTION section of the amdtemp(4) man page, there is a "be" that
does not belong there: "...and there are be up to two cores per CPU
Under "SEE ALSO", there is a reference to an envstat(4) man page that
does not exist. I think that should be envstat(8) instead?!
Also, the envsys(4) man page could probably be listed in the "SEE ALSO"
And finally, I think the wording of the second sentence in "HISTORY"
could be improved. Please refer to the below diff.
RCS file: /cvsroot/src/share/man/man4/amdtemp.4,v
retrieving revision 1.1
diff -b -u -r1.1 amdtemp.4
--- amdtemp.4 22 Apr 2008 22:37:13 -0000 1.1
+++ amdtemp.4 19 Nov 2008 11:59:33 -0000
@@ -43,7 +43,7 @@
These sensors were officially introduced in AMD K8 Revision F processors,
and provide 0.5 degC accuracy. Precision was improved in Revision
G chips, which provide two more bits for 0.25 degC steppings. Each core
-has two temperature sensors, and there are be up to two cores per CPU socket.
+has two temperature sensors, and there are up to two cores per CPU socket.
AMD Barcelona, AMD Phenom and AMD Griffin provide 0.125 degC accuracy
and provide one temperature sensor for each CPU socket.
@@ -58,7 +58,8 @@
.It Li "CPUN sensor0" Ta "uK" Ta "cpuN temperature"
.Sh SEE ALSO
-.Xr envstat 4 ,
+.Xr envsys 4 ,
+.Xr envstat 8 ,
.Xr powerd 8
@@ -67,7 +68,7 @@
.Xr kate 4 .
-And then was ported to
+It was then ported to
.Nx 5.0 .
The driver has been renamed with support for newer AMD CPUs.
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