Subject: misc/26859: [PATCH] language fixes for cnw(4)
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List: netbsd-bugs
Date: 09/05/2004 16:45:16
>Number:         26859
>Category:       misc
>Synopsis:       [PATCH] language fixes for cnw(4)
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    misc-bug-people
>State:          open
>Class:          doc-bug
>Submitter-Id:   net
>Arrival-Date:   Sun Sep 05 16:46:00 UTC 2004
>Originator:     Christian Brueffer
Language fixes for cnw(4):

- improve wording
- fix some grammar errors
- fix capitalization

--- cnw.4.orig  Sun Sep  5 17:29:35 2004
+++ cnw.4       Sun Sep  5 18:35:32 2004
@@ -41,7 +41,7 @@
 .Nm cnw
-.Tn Netwave AirSurfer Wireless network driver
+.Tn Netwave AirSurfer wireless network driver
 .Cd "cnw*     at pcmcia? function ?"
@@ -59,9 +59,9 @@
 .Xr awi 4
-Netwave devices are not compatible with IEEE 802.11 wireless network.
+Netwave devices are not compatible with IEEE 802.11 wireless networks.
 Also note that there are Netwave devices with different wireless frequency,
-depending on radio band plan in each countries.
+depending on the radio band plan in each country.
 The card uses 36K of I/O memory mapped to the card.
 .\"The card uses 32K of I/O memory mapped to the card along with either 16 I/O ports
@@ -79,10 +79,10 @@
 from microwaves, IEEE 802.11 wireless network devices, as well as earth.
 For example, it seems that IEEE 802.11 channel 14 conflicts with Netwave
 .Pq US frequency .
-They interfere each other if we operate both of them
+They interfere with each other if they are both operated
 in the same geographic region, causing weird packet loss.
 You may be able to avoid the interference with IEEE 802.11 devices,
-by changing IEEE 802.11 channel.
+by changing the IEEE 802.11 channel.
 Cards supported by the