Subject: misc/23753: Misc grammar problems with az(4) man page
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From: None <firstname.lastname@example.org>
Date: 12/14/2003 11:59:23
>Synopsis: Misc grammar problems with az(4) man page
>Arrival-Date: Sun Dec 14 17:00:01 UTC 2003
>Originator: Brian Chase
>Release: NetBSD 1.6ZG (13-Dec-2003)
System: NetBSD haiku.jarai.net 1.5.2 NetBSD 1.5.2 (HAIKU) #0: Wed Jan 2 22:41:47 PDT 2002 email@example.com:/u0/usr/src/sys/arch/i386/compile/HAIKU i386
There are a number of grammar problems with the az(4) man page.
I've included a patch which corrects the ones I noticed. I tried
to change the original text as little as possible.
RCS file: /cvsroot/src/share/man/man4/az.4,v
retrieving revision 1.4
diff -u -r1.4 az.4
--- az.4 2002/01/02 02:08:02 1.4
+++ az.4 2003/12/14 16:53:08
@@ -40,10 +40,10 @@
driver provides support for the Aztech/PackardBell radio cards.
-The Aztech/PackardBell cards are stereo FM tuners that allow to tune
+The Aztech/PackardBell cards are stereo FM tuners that allow tuning
in the 87.5-108.0 MHz range.
-It is capable to report signal status (tuned/not tuned, stereo/mono signal)
-and force audio output to mono.
+They are capable of reporting signal status (tuned/not tuned, stereo/mono
+signal) and forcing audio output to mono.
The Aztech cards use only one I/O port.
The I/O port is set by the driver to the value specified in the configuration
@@ -66,6 +66,6 @@
driver was written by Vladimir Popov and Maxim Tsyplakov.
The man page was written by Vladimir Popov.
-It is impossible to determine which frequency the card is tuned to.
+It is impossible to determine to which frequency the card is tuned.
Thus, the driver will report an internally stored value even if it is not
correct (changed by some program that uses direct port access).