Subject: bin/17281: Minor grammer edit to ipnat.5
To: None <gnats-bugs@gnats.netbsd.org>
From: None <franklin@elfie.org>
List: netbsd-bugs
Date: 06/16/2002 08:27:18
>Number:         17281
>Category:       bin
>Synopsis:       Minor grammer edit to ipnat.5
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    bin-bug-people
>State:          open
>Class:          doc-bug
>Submitter-Id:   net
>Arrival-Date:   Sun Jun 16 05:28:00 PDT 2002
>Closed-Date:
>Last-Modified:
>Originator:     John Franklin
>Release:        NetBSD-current (as of 16 June 02)
>Organization:
John Franklin
franklin@elfie.org
ICBM: 3543'56"N 7853'27"W
>Environment:
	
	
System: NetBSD deathmitten 1.5ZC NetBSD 1.5ZC (DM.MP) #43: Sat May 18 17:04:07 EDT 2002 franklin@deathmitten:/usr/src/sys/arch/i386-MP/compile/DM.MP i386
Architecture: i386
Machine: i386
>Description:
	
	The ipnat page mentions rdr is "used  for  redirecting  packets to one IP address and port pair to another".  Should read "from one IP address and port pair to another"  While I was at it, I gave that section of the ipnat.5 page a more consistent read.
>How-To-Repeat:
	
man 5 ipnat
>Fix:
	
Apply the patch below:


Index: ipnat.5
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvsroot/basesrc/dist/ipf/man/ipnat.5,v
retrieving revision 1.7
diff -u -r1.7 ipnat.5
--- ipnat.5	2002/05/02 17:11:39	1.7
+++ ipnat.5	2002/06/16 12:12:55
@@ -62,11 +62,11 @@
 There are four commands recognised by IP Filter's NAT code:
 .TP
 .B map
-that is used for mapping one address or network to another in an unregulated
+for mapping one address or network to another in an unregulated
 round robin fashion;
 .TP
 .B rdr
-that is used for redirecting packets to one IP address and port pair to
+for redirecting packets from one IP address and port pair to
 another;
 .TP
 .B bimap
@@ -74,7 +74,7 @@
 IP address and
 .TP
 .B map-block
-which sets up static IP address based translation, based on a algorithm to
+for setting up static IP address based translation, based on a algorithm to
 squeeze the addresses to be translated into the destination range.
 .SH MATCHING
 .PP
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