>Number:         4745
>Category:       port-amiga
>Synopsis:       some typos/cosmetic changes for distrib/notes/amiga/*
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       serious
>Priority:       high
>Responsible:    gnats-admin (GNATS administrator)
>State:          open
>Class:          doc-bug
>Submitter-Id:   net
>Arrival-Date:   Tue Dec 23 14:20:01 1997
>Last-Modified:
>Originator:     Thorsten Frueauf
>Organization:
private
	
>Release:        <NetBSD-current source date> NetBSD 1.3_BETA from 22.12.1997
>Environment:
	
System: NetBSD cyberlap 1.3_BETA NetBSD 1.3_BETA (CYBERLAP) #1: Tue Dec 23 00:38:22 MET 1997 frueauf@cyberlap:/usr/src/sys/arch/i386/compile/CYBERLAP i386


>Description:
	
I read the files in /src/distrib/notes/amiga/* and found some typos and
cosmetic inconsistences.

>How-To-Repeat:
	
Read /src/distrib/notes/amiga/*.

>Fix:
	
Apply the following diff to /src/distrib/notes/amiga/*:

*** /src/distrib/notes/amiga/contents	Mon Dec  1 18:00:02 1997
--- contents	Tue Dec 23 22:55:06 1997
***************
*** 13,24 ****
  				see below;
  
  	installation/
! 			miniroot/	Amiga miniroot file system
! 					image; see below.
  
! 			misc/		Miscellaneous Amiga
! 					installation utilities; see
! 					installation section, below.
  
  The Amiga now uses a single miniroot filesystem for both an initial
  installation and for an upgrade.  A gzipped version is available, for easier
--- 13,23 ----
  				see below;
  
  	installation/
! 		miniroot/	Amiga miniroot file system image;
! 				see below.
  
! 		misc/		Miscellaneous Amiga installation
! 				utilities; see installation section below.
  
  The Amiga now uses a single miniroot filesystem for both an initial
  installation and for an upgrade.  A gzipped version is available, for easier
***************
*** 105,117 ****
  The Amiga binary distribution sets are distributed in the same form as
  the source distribution sets; catted together, the members of a set
  form a gzipped tar file.  Each Amiga binary distribution set also has
! its own "CKSUMS" file, just as the source distribution sets do.
  
  The instructions given for extracting the source sets work equally
  well for the binary sets, but it is worth noting that if you use that
  method, the files are extracted "below" the current directory.  That
  is, if you want to extract the binaries "into" your system, i.e.
! replace the system binaries with them, you have to run the "tar xvfp"
  from /.  Also note that if you upgrade or install this way, those
  programs that you are using at the time will NOT be replaced.  If you
  follow the normal installation or upgrade procedures, this will be
--- 104,116 ----
  The Amiga binary distribution sets are distributed in the same form as
  the source distribution sets; catted together, the members of a set
  form a gzipped tar file.  Each Amiga binary distribution set also has
! its own checksum files, just as the source distribution sets do.
  
  The instructions given for extracting the source sets work equally
  well for the binary sets, but it is worth noting that if you use that
  method, the files are extracted "below" the current directory.  That
  is, if you want to extract the binaries "into" your system, i.e.
! replace the system binaries with them, you have to run the "tar xvpf"
  from /.  Also note that if you upgrade or install this way, those
  programs that you are using at the time will NOT be replaced.  If you
  follow the normal installation or upgrade procedures, this will be
*** /src/distrib/notes/amiga/install	Mon Dec  1 18:00:02 1997
--- install	Tue Dec 23 22:37:52 1997
***************
*** 117,123 ****
  
  	The install program will now make the the file systems you
  	specified.  There should be only one error per file system in
! 	this section of the installation.  It will look like so:
  
  		newfs: ioctl (WDINFO): Invalid argument
  		newfs: /dev/rsd0a: can't rewrite disk label
--- 117,123 ----
  
  	The install program will now make the the file systems you
  	specified.  There should be only one error per file system in
! 	this section of the installation.  It will look like this:
  
  		newfs: ioctl (WDINFO): Invalid argument
  		newfs: /dev/rsd0a: can't rewrite disk label
***************
*** 134,140 ****
  	Since the network configuration might have lead to additional (nfs)
  	filesystem entries, you get another chance to modify your fstab.
  
! 	Your are finally at the point where some real data will be put on
  	your freshly made filesystems. Select the device type you wish
  	to install from and off you go....
  	Some notes:
--- 134,140 ----
  	Since the network configuration might have lead to additional (nfs)
  	filesystem entries, you get another chance to modify your fstab.
  
! 	You are finally at the point where some real data will be put on
  	your freshly made filesystems. Select the device type you wish
  	to install from and off you go....
  	Some notes:
***************
*** 176,184 ****
  Your system is now complete but not completely configured; you
  should adjust the /etc/sendmail.cf file as necessary to suit your
  site and/or disable sendmail and other network related programs.
! These things can be found in /etc/netstart.  Use vi, if you installed
  the man pages you can type `man vi' or `man ed' for instructions
! on how to use these somewhat non-intuitive editors.
  
  Once you are done with the rest of configuration unmount your file
  systems and halt your system, then reboot:
--- 176,185 ----
  Your system is now complete but not completely configured; you
  should adjust the /etc/sendmail.cf file as necessary to suit your
  site and/or disable sendmail and other network related programs.
! These things can be found in /etc/rc.conf. Use vi, if you installed
  the man pages you can type `man vi' or `man ed' for instructions
! on how to use these somewhat non-intuitive editors, and `man rc.conf'
! to find out more about the this config file.
  
  Once you are done with the rest of configuration unmount your file
  systems and halt your system, then reboot:
*** /src/distrib/notes/amiga/prep	Tue Dec 16 17:11:20 1997
--- prep	Tue Dec 23 22:46:23 1997
***************
*** 1,7 ****
! You will need an AmigaDOS hard drive prep tool to prepare you hard
  drives for use with NetBSD/Amiga.  HDToolBox is provided with the
  system software and on floppy installation disks since Release 2.0
! of AmigaDOS so we will provide instructions for its use.
  
  Preparing you hard disk with HDToolBox:
  
--- 1,7 ----
! You will need an AmigaDOS hard drive prep tool to prepare your hard
  drives for use with NetBSD/Amiga.  HDToolBox is provided with the
  system software and on floppy installation disks since Release 2.0
! of AmigaDOS, so we will provide instructions for its use.
  
  Preparing you hard disk with HDToolBox:
  
***************
*** 13,19 ****
  	you enter the "Change drive type" menu, and either use "read
  	parameters from drive" or set them manually.
  
! 	Note you will be modifying your HD's if you mess something 
  	up here you could lose everything on all the drives that 
  	you configure.  It is therefore advised that you:
  
--- 13,19 ----
  	you enter the "Change drive type" menu, and either use "read
  	parameters from drive" or set them manually.
  
! 	Note you will be modifying your HD's, if you mess something 
  	up here you could lose everything on all the drives that 
  	you configure.  It is therefore advised that you:
  
***************
*** 25,35 ****
  
  	What you need to do is partition your drives; creating at least
  	root, swap and /usr partitions and possibly at least one more for
! 	/local if you have the space.
  
  	This should be done as the HDToolBox manual describes.  One thing
  	to note is that if you are not using a Commodore controller you
! 	will need to specify the device your SCSI controller uses e.g.
  	if you have a Warp Engine you would:
  
  		from cli,
--- 25,35 ----
  
  	What you need to do is partition your drives; creating at least
  	root, swap and /usr partitions and possibly at least one more for
! 	/usr/local if you have the space.
  
  	This should be done as the HDToolBox manual describes.  One thing
  	to note is that if you are not using a Commodore controller you
! 	will need to specify the device your SCSI controller uses, e.g.
  	if you have a Warp Engine you would:
  
  		from cli,
***************
*** 53,59 ****
  
  		- Click the `Adv. Options' button
  		- Click the `Change file system' button
- 
  		- Choose `Custom File System'
  		- Turn off `Automount' if on.
  		- Set the dostype to one of these three choices:
--- 53,58 ----
***************
*** 103,110 ****
  	file system (miniroot.fs) is transferred to the swap
  	partition configured during the hard disk prep (or the existing
  	swap partition in the case of an upgrade).  The xstreamtodev
! 	utility provided in the "amiga/utilities" directory can be used
! 	on AmigaDOS to transfer the file system for either a new
  	installation or an upgrade.  The file system can also be
  	transferred on an existing NetBSD system for an update by
  	using dd.  This should only be done after booting NetBSD
--- 102,109 ----
  	file system (miniroot.fs) is transferred to the swap
  	partition configured during the hard disk prep (or the existing
  	swap partition in the case of an upgrade).  The xstreamtodev
! 	utility provided in the "amiga/installation/misc" directory can
! 	be used on AmigaDOS to transfer the file system for either a new
  	installation or an upgrade.  The file system can also be
  	transferred on an existing NetBSD system for an update by
  	using dd.  This should only be done after booting NetBSD
*** /src/distrib/notes/amiga/upgrade	Mon Dec  1 18:00:03 1997
--- upgrade	Tue Dec 23 22:50:31 1997
***************
*** 123,129 ****
  	do, to insure that the system works properly.
  
  	You will probably want to get the etc distribution,
! 	extract it, and compare its contents with those in your /etc/
  	directory.  You will probably want to replace some of your
  	system configuration files, or incorporate some of the changes
  	in the new versions into yours.
--- 123,129 ----
  	do, to insure that the system works properly.
  
  	You will probably want to get the etc distribution,
! 	extract it, and compare its contents with those in your /etc
  	directory.  You will probably want to replace some of your
  	system configuration files, or incorporate some of the changes
  	in the new versions into yours.
>Audit-Trail:
>Unformatted:
some typos/cosmetic changes for distrib/notes/amiga/*