On Wed, 22 Feb 2006 11:19:54 -0500
Chapman Flack <nblists@anastigmatix.net> wrote:

> > Well well well, so once more from the start (bit remixed by me):
> 
> The re-mix seems to have shaken up the grammar at one point:
> 
> > An iSCSI, protocol which specifies a method
> > for encapsulating SCSI commands in the TCP/IP protocol, is an IETF
> > standard (RFC 3720) for remote access to block-level storage.
> 
> Suggest,
> 
>   iSCSI, a protocol for encapsulating SCSI commands over TCP/IP,
>   is an ...
> 
> Or (if starting with a lowercase i is unappealing), perhaps:
> 
>   The iSCSI protocol, for encapsulating SCSI commands over TCP/IP,
>   is an ...
> 
> Just my suggestions, worth what you paid for 'em. Otherwise it
> looks great.

Thanks for the comments, Chap. Well, it just was completely reworded
and now should be visible on the site within a hour. Please watch out.
8-)

--
Mishka.